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Translation - Latin-English - Lacrimae ex oculis meis fluunt,sed crepusculum...
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Title
Lacrimae ex oculis meis fluunt,sed crepusculum...
Text
Submitted by
Demise
Source language: Latin
Lacrimae ex oculis meis fluunt,sed crepusculum fletum meum tranquillat.
Title
Tears flow from my eyes, but the dawn calms my weep.
Translation
English
Translated by
evulitsa
Target language: English
Tears flow from my eyes, but the dawn calms my weeping.
Validated by
Tantine
- 17 January 2008 23:52
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16 January 2008 21:54
Tantine
Number of messages: 2747
Hi Evulitsa
I suggest one very slight correction.
How about putting "flow from my eyes" rather than "fall from my eyes".
I admit that the word "fall" can be used for the liquide element, but "flow" seems to convey the idea better.
Bises
Tantine
17 January 2008 08:48
dramati
Number of messages: 972
I agree with Tantine, and since it still is loyal to the translation, have edited it. While the former was ok, this is a far better use of English to get to the same place.