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Translation - Latin-English - Lacrimae ex oculis meis fluunt,sed crepusculum...

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Title
Lacrimae ex oculis meis fluunt,sed crepusculum...
Text
Submitted by Demise
Source language: Latin

Lacrimae ex oculis meis fluunt,sed crepusculum fletum meum tranquillat.

Title
Tears flow from my eyes, but the dawn calms my weep.
Translation
English

Translated by evulitsa
Target language: English

Tears flow from my eyes, but the dawn calms my weeping.
Validated by Tantine - 17 January 2008 23:52





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16 January 2008 21:54

Tantine
Number of messages: 2747
Hi Evulitsa

I suggest one very slight correction.

How about putting "flow from my eyes" rather than "fall from my eyes".

I admit that the word "fall" can be used for the liquide element, but "flow" seems to convey the idea better.

Bises
Tantine

17 January 2008 08:48

dramati
Number of messages: 972
I agree with Tantine, and since it still is loyal to the translation, have edited it. While the former was ok, this is a far better use of English to get to the same place.